Advice wanted for music videos!

[WillTrestarian]

A friend of mine has asked me to help her make some cool and interesting music videos for her songs and I just wanted to know what people thought of them and if they had any suggestions for how we could improve?
She wants me to make something really memorable which I definitely haven't done yet so I'd love to get some advice and get my creative juices flowing.
Here's one we uploaded the other day, what do you think?
http://youtu.be/5WBczkm5bZ0

[Channel Hopper]

She wants me to make something really memorable which I definitely haven't done yet

It shows, don't give up your day job.